Does It Mean That I’m Indispensable?

Here I thought I was an unessential,

Not more than a passing breeze to lighten

The harshness of this wounding heat,

Not more than a passing smile and nod,

Another count for approval

That soon, too, will be forgotten.

Here I thought I was an uncertainty,

An existence that would not be

Seen as more than what it presents;

Not that it is unknowable

But because it is not worth knowing.

But now, here I wonder why

Amidst all that I am not,

And all that I can no longer be,

He misses me.

Poetry Rally 28

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About kyogakura
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24 Responses to Does It Mean That I’m Indispensable?

  1. Summer S. says:

    This poem is filled with much emotion. Very good work. Cheers!

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  4. Jingle says:

    lovely job!

  5. Jingle says:

    it is so beautiful,
    the image is stunning and adds so much credit to your words..
    perfect poem!
    Thanks for sharing!

    current rule is to visit and comment for 18 poets, u may find 18 NEW poets from your participant list.

    • kyoichi says:

      i’ll be doing it now. i’ll let you know when i get the 18th one done.

      thank you, jingle.

      =]

  6. Jingle says:

    I mean from my week 28 participants list…
    have fun reading!
    😉
    Happy Sunday!

  7. dcwright02 says:

    great read, thanks for sharing!

  8. I love your poem. The flow and the words, the picture imprinted in my mind. Amazing.

    My Poets Rally Poem: http://robinelizabeth58.wordpress.com/2010/08/05/falling-august-5-2010/

  9. Alethea says:

    I loved the flow of your poem…very smooth, very soft, very deep…

  10. mairmusic says:

    The emptiness of this identity-less persona is haunting somehow– well written!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

  11. hindawy says:

    Nice one Kyoichi

    Liked

    Here I thought I was an uncertainty,

    An existence that would not be

    Keep it up 🙂

    • kyoichi says:

      it’s a longshot from when i used to use rhyme soooo…we like both =]

      thank you hindawy.

  12. oh kyogakura i missed you too… for i am reading ur posts for the first time……
    Really a beautiful poem with a surprise element in the end.

    cheers!!!

  13. Jingle says:

    Happy Wednesday!
    Thanks for the participation!
    🙂

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  16. Olivia says:

    Cute and beautiful.. 😀

  17. Olivia says:

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/monday-poetry-potluck-kings-queens-and.html

    Hello, friend:

    Monday Poetry Potluck Is NOW open, linking is open from Sunday 8pm to Tuesday, 8pm, welcome join us by linking in 1 to 3 poems, you could use an old poem, the more you share, the happier we are…hurry up!
    Thanks in advance.
    Hope to see you in our lovely potluck…

  18. Ah the constant brooding brought upon by human interactions, perhaps it’s the kind of thing that just happens lo que sera sera only time will tell who is and is not indispensable

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